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NekoNeko
NekoNekoLv65yr
2019-10-13 10:02

Rating: 3.8 star Writing quality: 5 star Nothing to talk about, very good written, especially the prologue. Stability of updating: 5 star Actually wanted to give 1 star, but since author showed 0 chapter/week means he did what he promised. Story development: 4 star The story is very well developed. We get information about the world slowly, not too much and not too little. It’s just enough making the story easy to follow. Character design: 1 star This is the point which destroyed the whole story. It’s fine to make main character coward, ignorance or pushover etc. But it’s not fine to make main character stupid or a liar. World background: 4 star Very well done on the world building. Very creative and promising.

My Perverse Equivalent Exchange System in Doomsday

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