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there is an idea there but you should rewrite everything, try to make it a little slower, explain better and maybe it will be god, too rushed, no world background, nothing is well explained, too bad

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Rise of the Blood Wolf

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I will try my best, I will try to rewrite the start because it's a basic explanation of the universe but only after I am bit advanced because I want to have a good base but also see what will the base be used upon.