Review Detail of krnegi in The Last X

After FOD, I've been constantly searching for similar stories, even going so far as to read straight multiverse stories! But this one hits all the sweet spots :) Also, although the writing style was good from the beginning, I feel that its gotten better as the story progressed ☆ The only suggestion I can give is to increase details & have more complicated arcs cuz the story seem pretty straightforward & easy... so any sense of anticipation is lacking 4 the reader...************** That said, it is still better than a few of the published multiverse stories out there, and is my current favourite original story ♡ Honestly, I could read this novel forever... I'd give it a 4-4.5star rating if this was a properly published novel... but since its not, I'm giving 5 stars!