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soulshocker
soulshockerLv66yr
2018-07-16 01:26

Honestly the previous story was better than this one , loved the build up of the previous story you could have continued the other story but just rewritten the lst 2-3 chapters instead of writing this one because the other one was much better

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I only planned to change the beginning, but doing so would effect the entire story very heavily and make things a lot more confusing. I will still try to use the material from the old story and incorporate it into this one with slight changes so that the story as a whole will flow better instead of mixing a new beginning with the old story as it was. So please give me some time to give you more chapters. I'll be sure to keep many things from the previos one. Also, thank you. Thank you for reading my novel and writing this review and telling me your opinions.

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