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LonelyChiliLv66yr
2018-08-20 11:57

At least you put more twist in the story.. later i guess after this arc.. that will be cool if there is an assassin system.. there will be other system like warrior system meaning there are other reincarnators in this world but still focus on the mc... that will be more diffuclt i guess...... but continue the hardwork...

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DemiTwTLv5

I mean.... That would be pretty cool.... And the point of view and stuff would have to flow nicely... .....

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NOTE: THIS REVIEW IS MADE FOR THE FIRST VERSION OF THE BOOK.

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