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Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv134yrLord_Meph1sto

I really like your story and your way of writing but I just cant further take in and read the fact that his mother is a ***** and a slut but shows concern to him. If only that plot was changed... ha gud luck since i am dropping it.

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Wudang: Legends Of Qi Earth

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Anone
AnoneAuthorAnone

First of😅😅🤣 his mother is not any of those things 🤣🤣🤣 I just used a bit of deflection in this story, that's the perception of the world of her, not the real story behind her or her actions. This was just to create angst between mother and child, there's more. A wise monkey once said "Look beyond what you see" or in this case read😅😅😅 Thanks so much for reading either way

Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

Well he has a sister who dont resemble him and some other stuff, but i am not a fan of temporary or permanent ntr in here his mom, well good luck. I really love ur writing.I will be looking forward to ur other books.

Anone:First of😅😅🤣 his mother is not any of those things 🤣🤣🤣 I just used a bit of deflection in this story, that's the perception of the world of her, not the real story behind her or her actions. This was just to create angst between mother and child, there's more. A wise monkey once said "Look beyond what you see" or in this case read😅😅😅 Thanks so much for reading either way
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

Well he has a sister who dont resemble him and some other stuff, but i am not a fan of temporary or permanent ntr in here his mom, well good luck. I really love ur writing.I will be looking forward to ur other books.

Anone:First of😅😅🤣 his mother is not any of those things 🤣🤣🤣 I just used a bit of deflection in this story, that's the perception of the world of her, not the real story behind her or her actions. This was just to create angst between mother and child, there's more. A wise monkey once said "Look beyond what you see" or in this case read😅😅😅 Thanks so much for reading either way
Anone
AnoneAuthorAnone

There was never a case of Ntr with his mom, and as for his sister, I don't get the point you're trying to make. I'm not a fan of incest if that's what you're implying.

Lord_Meph1sto:Well he has a sister who dont resemble him and some other stuff, but i am not a fan of temporary or permanent ntr in here his mom, well good luck. I really love ur writing.I will be looking forward to ur other books.
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

So there was a case of mc questening his sister s parentage and saying how many flings his mom had?

Anone:There was never a case of Ntr with his mom, and as for his sister, I don't get the point you're trying to make. I'm not a fan of incest if that's what you're implying.
Anone
AnoneAuthorAnone

Oh yeah! Don't worry she's his sister for reals, just from a different father. If you read further the entire backstory is revealed, don't want to spoil too much

Lord_Meph1sto:So there was a case of mc questening his sister s parentage and saying how many flings his mom had?
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

Yep diff father thats it!! I am not a fan of 2nd love, divorce,..,..

Anone:Oh yeah! Don't worry she's his sister for reals, just from a different father. If you read further the entire backstory is revealed, don't want to spoil too much
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

I could take a step sister from dads side but mom, no way!! Sorry dude. Best luck

Anone:Oh yeah! Don't worry she's his sister for reals, just from a different father. If you read further the entire backstory is revealed, don't want to spoil too much
Anone
AnoneAuthorAnone

And why is it okay for his dad to have another child out from another relationship and it's not okay for his mom. So basically if you meet a woman who already has a kid, then it's a bad thing 🤔🤔🤔 I'm, there's isn't really much to say. So far you've read and only focused on one plot that isn't really focal to the story as a whole, and even then you've only explored one part of it, without getting to the point where it's all come full circle. Nevertheless thank you for reading 😅😅😅

Lord_Meph1sto:I could take a step sister from dads side but mom, no way!! Sorry dude. Best luck
Anone
AnoneAuthorAnone

Let's say for example a previous spouse is abusive, she should remain in the relationship? 😟😟🤨🤨Or what if he dies! She should remain single and not find happiness! Okay what? Love doesn't always work out the first time, but why are you not a fan of finding happiness a second time.

Lord_Meph1sto:Yep diff father thats it!! I am not a fan of 2nd love, divorce,..,..
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

Maybe, but a 3 rd time no.Its a valid point ok. But i hate a mom coupled with these kind of things who left their son at a young age, no matter how grave the circumstances, only to come in the future acting she cares a lot and stuff. What is lost is lost! whatever reason is present that's all invalid. Childhood is the phase a person needs their mom the most. After that it doesnt matter since he gets his rapport from friends, wife etc. It just doesn't matter.So even if the reasoning is due to life threatening situation if u left him to fend for himself its no better than throwing away ur responsibility. Sry the above are not the premises in the story but i cant help criticize the moms in stories I read that left their child at young age but come back to their children in future and saying their situation and becoming The Best Mom from there. No one lives for the world,they live for themselves.What I dont get when i needed u, u wont get whatever u do. Comment relates to the story only a tiny bit.And good luck.

Anone:Let's say for example a previous spouse is abusive, she should remain in the relationship? 😟😟🤨🤨Or what if he dies! She should remain single and not find happiness! Okay what? Love doesn't always work out the first time, but why are you not a fan of finding happiness a second time.
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

Oh this is the main readon i stopping reading even though it varies a bit. Other points are all tolerable to a extent.

Lord_Meph1sto:Maybe, but a 3 rd time no.Its a valid point ok. But i hate a mom coupled with these kind of things who left their son at a young age, no matter how grave the circumstances, only to come in the future acting she cares a lot and stuff. What is lost is lost! whatever reason is present that's all invalid. Childhood is the phase a person needs their mom the most. After that it doesnt matter since he gets his rapport from friends, wife etc. It just doesn't matter.So even if the reasoning is due to life threatening situation if u left him to fend for himself its no better than throwing away ur responsibility. Sry the above are not the premises in the story but i cant help criticize the moms in stories I read that left their child at young age but come back to their children in future and saying their situation and becoming The Best Mom from there. No one lives for the world,they live for themselves.What I dont get when i needed u, u wont get whatever u do. Comment relates to the story only a tiny bit.And good luck.
Anone
AnoneAuthorAnone

Yeah I understand, let me let you in on a little secret, his Mom's backstory is very complicated, but it was based on a real life woman, my mom. Now my mom didn't have kids for other men, me and my sisters luckily and happily share the same father. But their marriage was complicated and for a very long time, we were separated from her. And then my Dad died..... It would be extremely easy to be angsty and hold it against her, to hate her. But what's the use, she loves us, I know that much, and honestly in the face of a mother's love, some mistakes don't matter. I couldn't carry that pain and hurt for the rest of my life, neither could my sisters, she's all we've got. I have an idea of what kind of hell our lives could have been if we held on to that pain, especially when there were so many people whispering and telling us our mother was a bad person. But it wasn't as simple, sometimes life isn't as black and white as it seems, but a mother's love for her children and her children's father is absolute! Thats what I believe, and that has save my family. I couldn't put Alex through that he'll, plus there's still a long way for him to go to reconcile with her fully. Love actually conquers all

Lord_Meph1sto:Maybe, but a 3 rd time no.Its a valid point ok. But i hate a mom coupled with these kind of things who left their son at a young age, no matter how grave the circumstances, only to come in the future acting she cares a lot and stuff. What is lost is lost! whatever reason is present that's all invalid. Childhood is the phase a person needs their mom the most. After that it doesnt matter since he gets his rapport from friends, wife etc. It just doesn't matter.So even if the reasoning is due to life threatening situation if u left him to fend for himself its no better than throwing away ur responsibility. Sry the above are not the premises in the story but i cant help criticize the moms in stories I read that left their child at young age but come back to their children in future and saying their situation and becoming The Best Mom from there. No one lives for the world,they live for themselves.What I dont get when i needed u, u wont get whatever u do. Comment relates to the story only a tiny bit.And good luck.