Is not going to be long winded review, but the grammar could be improved and also his style of writing. But English is not his first language and I think I don’t have problem with that. I’m just trying to be honest here. But let’s talk about the story itself. Marvelously crafted. Small details decorating the story to know and understand out character is not only one sided but has a human emotion. The world build is pretty interesting too. Sometimes you don’t have to tell everyone what’s going on but can actually show them what they have in the story. Like when the author introduces technology to the era where martial arts reigning supreme. Overall this could be really good story!
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