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Daoist_Angel_Blue
Daoist_Angel_BlueLv145yrDaoist_Angel_Blue

I want to like the story, but the grammar is just hard to stomach after 10 or 15 chapters... please find a beta or proofreader... This story has so much potential, but the bad English is ruining the enjoyment of the story.

altalt

The supreme sovereign system

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Replies9

Oppaislife
OppaislifeLv5Oppaislife

Is this good?

Daoist_Angel_Blue
Daoist_Angel_BlueLv14Daoist_Angel_Blue

It has potential, but the grammar (when I read it) is quite bad. MTL might be better.

Oppaislife:Is this good?
animangaex
animangaexLv7animangaex

If you like OP MCs.

Oppaislife:Is this good?
Abendfeuer
AbendfeuerLv14Abendfeuer

I agree, stopped after 5 chapters

Juliet_Bibi
Juliet_BibiLv2Juliet_Bibi

Nice

Juliet_Bibi
Juliet_BibiLv2Juliet_Bibi

Nice

Neko_Nyaa
Neko_NyaaLv2Neko_Nyaa

hey can someone tell me if there is romance or harem in this novel????

IMPAiLER
IMPAiLERLv5IMPAiLER

there is. I think

Neko_Nyaa:hey can someone tell me if there is romance or harem in this novel????
Jmitch1
Jmitch1Lv15Jmitch1

Yeah… can’t Continue . Bad English