Item: Music System in a Cultivation World: What the F*ck?
Rating: 1
Author: unIReap

unIReapLv146yr

2018-07-03 05:16

sh1ties novel ever , the story is all jumbled together its barley understandable in the story line and the chapters is like a couple of ords thats it nothing more and nothing less.

Music System in a Cultivation World: What the F*ck?

Leialeial

4.1

243 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies2

LeialeialAuthor

Thanks for the review! Have a nice day. 🐈

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XPlosionLv5

I don't think you have the qualifications to say the story is barely understandable, with your terrible spelling/grammar, but okay.

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Hello, the author here. This is a gag novel. There is little to no story, and the system is a sadistic, fujoshi. If this isn't your thing, then kindly leave. What I can tell you, however, is that Jin Yahui will never be OP. In fact, he's weak and is scared of everything. He's human. If you expect some OP protagonist, kindly leave. There isn't that much world-building, and for that I'm sorry. I'm an ******* author, and I'm trying my best. If you don't like the story, then tell it in a civilized manner. I don't appreciate a one-star when I at least deserve two ;) ¯\_(ツ)_/ ¯

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I'll give the same stars as the author, I just wanted to say that I'm very impressed by your calm and collected composition in the responses, this is a very interesting and innovative novel. Wish you luck in your endeavours, cheers. I recommend using YouTube while reading this if you are not aquinted with the music

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