Review Detail of Pingo in A Helping Hand - a RtW fanfiction

This is fucking amazing. For some reason the moment Zero and Steven started working together I started to ship them so fucking hard. It is more fun to read than the original for some odd reason, and although theres not much details (expect for Steven going full retard with knowledge) it is still fun. In fact, the original has areas in chapters which are overfilled by knowledge and facts which actually make the chapters really tiring to read. Although that is what primarily makes the novel, too much is bad, while too little makes it seem bland. This spinoff novel is more fun to read, has the right amount of facts and knowledge and still mixes in something that entice me to read more without any cliff hangers or 'find out more next time' scenarios. I love Zero. Like I want some rule34 kind of love. Ignore I said that. This is too damn good. You gotta continue writing this even after the contest is over. Please. This is superior to the original lmao.