I really really liked this story, and I especially appreciated having longer chapters! The characters have depth and the story is able to transition between its light and darkness well. The ending gave me such a feeling I don’t know how to explain it. (Maybe a spoiler? It’s just my feelings [idk if they’re shared] on whether or not the story ends on a happy or sad note the story finished) Maybe a little bitter, but also wildly sweet! I could feel the emotions of the main character so strongly even though the future is not entirely certain. Feeling ‘Damn prideful’ is exactly how I felt. You can feel how proud the main character is of herself (and the horse 😂) in that moment. It’s a really beautiful end (the first epilogue which is where we are right now). That pride transitions right over to the author for doing such an amazing job conveying her characters feelings and motivations so well, without having to lay it out bare for the reader. Thank you. This is wonderfully written and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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