Item: Immortal System
Rating: 3.6
Author: God_King

God_KingLv65yr

2019-02-15 09:47

Rather cliche system story, but that doesn't mean it's bad. What I dont like is how bad the grammar is and there is no improvement in fact i feel like it got worse, and since there is nothing new and interesting about this novel I'd rather not have to struggle to decipher what the author meant.

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