Review Detail of mrpixeltech in EVO WARS SYSTEM

The story is well written. I'd encourage the author to find a more succinct way of showing the system feedback as it currently takes up 25% of a chapter (sure would be nice if inkstone supported tables). I don't feel we know enough about the characters yet as most of the characters, aside from MC were given some background and then left to simmer, but it's still early on in the story. Overall, well done for the first 17 chapters :)