Story is good but PLEASE no harem. I am starting to see harem built up. We need a MC who don’t need to take in females every time he meets them. We need balance with males. Also, please make the MC smarter. He seem to always help woman or he has no knowledge of how his power may bring benefits to his enemies or catch too much attention. Basically he has no control whatsoever on his power and doesn’t seem to think deeply on people he takes in. Almost like picking up trashes along the way and somehow they are women. No offense.
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