Item: In the remakes
Rating: 1.4
Author: Misguided_Rooster

Misguided_RoosterLv56yr

2018-06-17 13:30

Good idea, but bad writing and story building, character design and world background. I like the idea of this story, so good luck and please fix the grammar issues(Redoing the whole story would be good at this point. You should try and be a little more descriptive and side characters need a MAJOR rework)

In the remakes

Void_Creator

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17 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies2

Void_CreatorAuthor

In all honesty I've been feeling the same way. Thanks for the recommendation!

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Misguided_RoosterLv5

If you want I can help you rewrite it. Or I can help fix grammatical issues.

Void_Creator:In all honesty I've been feeling the same way. Thanks for the recommendation!

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