Hmmm, the first 20 chapters wer made months ago, and that was the time that, I'm a complete newbie... But now, I've improved! I'm an an ecperienced newbie! Don't fight, there's an improvement. And hey! I accept it, in my country although english is our second language, but out of 100 schools, only 1 out of a hundred has a decent english teacher. I've studied in a public school, where the teacher is too old, and has 100 students packed into a single room, but hey, can't blame the old trying to make a living. So i learned how to speak in english, by watching anime, reading manga, and reading novels... I'm a worker for 12 hours, A dad for 6 hours, a writer for 2 hours. And i sleep for 4 hours... Removing 2 hours of my sleep just to write some chapters. But hey, Iguess that's an invalid excuse, so why not stop becoming an author? In that way, people that likes to read wouldn't get their eyes hurt so much by reading my novel. And now... Since i've finally had it with all these "freaking ****ty stupid grammar" "unreadable words!" "Filled with spelling mistakes" I'll stop writing, thanks! I just want to make people happy with this hobby of mine, i'm not even earning anything here for posting, so why bother right? Let us all stop my novels from further spreading into ****ty shits then. Ciao ciao, i'll just stop here then. And thanks for leaving this inspiring review, well all those other reviews too! I'll gladly stop now. Sincerely. From a heavily stressed Dad, Husband, Author, and Worker.

My goal was not to cause you any phycological harm, I only wanted to state my first opinions of your novel and what I thought of it in an honest first review. I realise I didn’t convey my point in the best way and may have come across as sounding harsh but I strongly believe whatever hurts you makes you stronger. Through a hurtful and clean cut review I hoped to point out what I noticed at first glance, I never meant to come across in a malicious way and sincerely hope you find fun in writing and don’t take reviews like mine to heart. I’m sorry for any harm this review of mine has caused and respect that you have made something out of nothing and strongly hope you continue to do so. Sadly there’s always going to people like me to criticise no matter what, in my case I was criticising with hopes of boot sting the improvment of writing with no knowledge of who you are and what language you speak, whether English is your first. Again I’m sorry for the review but again I strongly state,

Improvements are only made on bad beginnings. I hope to see you uploading again when you learn to ignore or accept there is always going to be people to criticise others. Sincerely an honest reviewer

I`ll just make one thing clear then :D For your own good, not mine, as an Author, In what I've seen. You should stop looking at people, other people, that they have the same perfection as you. Sadly for me, I can't do that as I barely know anything in english other than its Words, I don't know all of those noun, pronoun, etc stuffs. Well, I hope you have a great life, and a lot of great social bonds. No offense meant, I just like to see people change whenever I provide some advices :D Sincerely, from a stupid Author :D

Thanks...?

When someone writes in a different language issues happen with grammar. I do not think that the Author knows of those errors. I also for the most part do not care about said errors. He is not going for a Hugo or Pulitzer. But thank you for being a grammar Nazi.

No problem man, only stated my opinion to get it off my chest, maybe you don’t care about that stuff but I don’t like to read anything if it isn’t structured well. That’s just me thought, if that makes me a grammar n... then so be it.

Thanks for the reply.

Yoooo, all he said was some truths about the guys writing? Honestly I’m suprised the guy even guilt trip the reviewer because he was being honest? That’s just sh!t. Sure you can make mistakes and what not, but you can’t go about things like writing novels and then being salty over constructive criticism? Why would you disregard that? Without critical people, we would never pick up on our mistakes and never improve! As he stated there was a review about the authors spelling and he clearly stated he didn’t see any! Isn’t that more an opportunity than a person just being mean? The author wouldn’t of known and now he does. That is exactly what this review is stating. This author doesn’t necessarily have to be the best but when I do things I would prefer them to be done to the best of my abilities. If someone corrects me and they’re right, then what right do I have telling them to go get ****ed cause I can’t handle criticism? Sure you have your troubles but we don’t know that? You shouldnt blame someone for your own inadequacies, you should take it with a grain of salt and improve!

STFU FedNanders, other have the right to talk but not you. In The Great Thief, chapter 418, I corrected you. And the answear I got from you is your bullsh*t. And the worst is you tried to change subject and talk sh*t about me. So don’t come here and educate other if you can’t accept other do the same to you. And it’s clear that you can’t accept, so STFU and get out of here.

Lmao you fucking loser as if you went on my profile and went to my recently commented just to get my attention 😂 HAHAHA maaaate you’re low key creepy asf stalking ass b!tch. Gtfo you gimp I ain’t even gunna read that garbage 😂😂

Also you were wrong in that comment thread, how are you that dumb to think you were right? 😂 you should see someone, you sound like an absolute psycho...

Ohh please stop being so full of yourself. You are not the center of the world, you are nothing more than a nobody like other people, stop being narcissist.

Me being wrong? Then tell me what for wrong I did. I made a statment that MC always pay someone when he use someone. And made a question about a female lead ,if she she did the same. So tell me, what wrong did I make? Don’t come and say grammar, since I have already used fact to prove my grammer was right, while you onle keep saying my grammer without saying where or what is wrong.

How am I being full of myself you loser 😂 Also if you knew what a narcissist was then you wouldn’t used it as an insult lmao nice try tho, can take the moral high ground when you’re an idiot who can’t take being wrong 🤭🤔

Yea then I said that you’re wrong that she just paid him for info and you for some reason lost your **** 😂 why are you so edgy kid? Get a grip

Narcissist is not an insult, it’s a character description, learn that.

What I am asking about is not whether she paid or not, I am asking about my spelling you talk about is wrong.

Why are you always changing subject? Can’t you just answer a ****** question?

Lmao but when you’re calling someone a narcissist when they aren’t is an insult you fool