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sensitiveears
sensitiveearsLv56yr
2018-07-23 02:49

I really enjoy this type of genre normally but I just couldn't read further. The chapters are littered with spelling mistakes, the dialogue seem forced and unrealistic and the pace is through the roof. I really wanted to keep reading but the writing quality is not good. 5/5 for updating stability though.

Masters of Faith Medieval

OmnipotentDad
4.0
86 Chs

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OmnipotentDad
OmnipotentDadAuthor

I haven't really seen any spelling mistakes... But if what ur saying is true, i'll need to change my releases from 7 to 10 chapters a week to 2to 3 per week, i'll check every words and re read it a few hundred times, since i only have 3 hours worth of writing time per day, if i wanted to sleep properly, 8 hrs a day, i'll get 1 to 2hrs of writing a chapter per day, So to increase the quality of my work, my novel's chapter well slow down it's phase to satisfy your taste, thanks for giving my novel your review... I wish i could find those spelling mistakes though...

6yr
sensitiveears
sensitiveearsLv5

On my phone right now so I can't point them all out, but what I remember is especially some capitalization mistakes after periods and the word "dealth". Pretty sure that is without the h.

6yr
Abcalltheway
AbcallthewayLv13

Well Id reccomend using grammarly + maybe " or * before and after someone speaks since very Hard to know when it is inner dialogue /3rd view or someone talking :p

OmnipotentDad:I haven't really seen any spelling mistakes... But if what ur saying is true, i'll need to change my releases from 7 to 10 chapters a week to 2to 3 per week, i'll check every words and re read it a few hundred times, since i only have 3 hours worth of writing time per day, if i wanted to sleep properly, 8 hrs a day, i'll get 1 to 2hrs of writing a chapter per day, So to increase the quality of my work, my novel's chapter well slow down it's phase to satisfy your taste, thanks for giving my novel your review... I wish i could find those spelling mistakes though...
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OmnipotentDad
OmnipotentDadAuthor

I`ve started using that on chapter 90 onward

Abcalltheway:Well Id reccomend using grammarly + maybe " or * before and after someone speaks since very Hard to know when it is inner dialogue /3rd view or someone talking :p
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Fuzzypeach
FuzzypeachLv14

I don't think it's the spelling as much as the way the sentences are built and the choice of words. It does not flow well, so it makes for a difficult read. But this is something that improves with reading well made books and texts and by writing, so I wish you good luck and hang in there!

6yr
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OmnipotentDad
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Hello Everyone, Author here, I`ll be pausing this Novel for now, I need to finish the 100th chapter of Supreme Martial System, And i`ll be continuing this together with Heavenly Sovereign on Earth afterwards. It's such a heart break for me, but i`ll continue this afterwards. Releasing three novels a day takes a lot of pressure, as I`m a Lone author, I hope you guys understand. I might come back here and update this novel once every now and then. But until i finish my volume 1 of Supreme Martial system, I`ll focus that first, only 22 chapters left! I`ll immediately update this two novels with massive releases don't worry.

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ThisGuyy
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The sypnosis got my good novel sense tingling and a reincarnation vrmmorpg novel is great combination just like "Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God" and "The World Online"

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Bulldog
BulldogLv10

Don’t mean to sound harsh but going to put this review up anyway. Straight off the bat from opening this novel page the synopsis is littered with grammar errors that don’t take much effort to fix, this makes me want to read the novel less and does not give me the impression the author puts effort into the novel. After looking through the synopsis I straight away looked through the comments to find people with similar opinions to me. I managed to find one stating that the novel contained a lot of spelling mistakes which I will also assume also meant grammatical errors. After reading this comment and seeing the reply back from the author which contained a message with the reply saying they he/she will review past chapters in a sartirical manner and also said that they did not find any spelling mistakes. This would be agreeable and I would have found no trouble with it if the synopsis was not in the state it was. After reading this comment I thought if he/she could confidently state there was no spelling mistakes in the chapters then that would mean he had read through them and double checked, which means he/she overlooked the grammar mistakes and made me make this comment out of boredom. I realise no everyone has the time to overlook their work but it just degrades it and stops new visitors from opening and reading what I’m sure is a good read all problems aside. Sorry if you don’t agree with this comment but had to put it up out of nessasity. Also thanks author for taking the time to make a novel in the first place.

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Panjif
PanjifLv14

good novel i love this i remember my fav weed from moonlight sculpture but its readable and thanks i love ur novel hope u will serious to this novle im your 1 fans ( @_@ v )

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plastic_doll
plastic_dollLv5

Author, with all honesty, your English is horrendous. You might not realize it, but the way you write is very confusing and many words are unnecessary. If u need me to list examples, I'll do so with a correction too. But I ignored that, since if I like a novel I'll read despite the hurdles. As for the story, nothing really original fyi tbh.. not that it's bad, I don't mind it. But everything is way too rushed, he becomes lvl 10 when everyone is 2&1, he doesn't even struggle killing the boss announced globally, just slash and hack, no dodge, no low health.. nothing no struggle. again, lvl2 vs lvl 15! And the CEO of the gaming company is kind to him, only kind. Yes, he offered on the phone to buy him a house, cars, pets, jets, guns and the world? And he did, the most expensive too! it's like he had a son that he now remembers? and when knowing the MCs linage(warring states era's leading martial linage), he starts crying thanking God for letting him know that the one they should serve is alive??? A cult?hmm.. What is this nonsense, seriously?.. he made 2 million $ or wtv in 2/3 days? If weed knew this, he would start killing left and right, kill himself at the end, revive, kill himself again, a loop. Oh and supposedly this isn't a harem okay? Fine even better. But noo, it can't be that dream novel?? where there's no actual harem, right!!!!??Yep u guessed right. No harem. But u look right, there's a girl "oh my so hot and cool, can I have a screenshot?" Everytime. Then left, oh not surprisingly another girl?!?? "sooo rich and handsome, if only I could marry him I will forever be happy". Idk wtv doesn't suit my taste, author I hope you improve and I sincerely urge you to check up on earlier chapters every now and then and not neglect keeping them up to date with your improvement. Reached chapter 20, couldn't continue on my injured soul.. good luck!

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OneLetterBoy
OneLetterBoyLv5

The story is good and keep the good work for more interesting upcoming chapters, maybe slowdown a bit the progress of the MC it's kinda fast forward atlest put some small dialog in between.

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Gilhena
GilhenaLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Nightless45
Nightless45Lv2

After this or before this get update can you work on these it a good book and on some site the author drop thsese novel that are good.plz do not drop these novel ok i want to read them again then go back to see if there update

6yr
Nightless45
Nightless45Lv2

It a great book i am finish tho when i was on the last chapter i throught there was more so i click my volume down to go but when i try to click down for at least 1min i throught it broke then again i came back here and saw it was 12 chapter only.i was so hype good book tho.Keep the great Work Author

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