Review Detail of Khavos_Rudd in The Supreme Uprising
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Title should be changed to "Supreme Trope" in order to reflect the actual story development that is being pursued. Looks like I will be dropping this story and I am leaving this final 'review' just to let the author know I care.
The Supreme Uprising
Jewelcat
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It is worth a read if you need something to waste your time on. However, it seems this author is 100% incapable of moving the story forward unless there is some HUGE Badass group that he has to surpass ASAP or die. Why can't the author progress the story through finding out secrets to the world? Stuff left behind in ruins and old ancient tombs? I worry that this will be the the only way things progress for the rest of the story. There are 100s of stories that do this and almost 85%-90% of them are all trash
It got to the point there were Atlanteans popping up out of the seas. I had it wrong though...I thought it would be some kind of space-born humans who came back at an inauspicious moment. I guess the author threw me off with that one.
SorcererCat:It is worth a read if you need something to waste your time on. However, it seems this author is 100% incapable of moving the story forward unless there is some HUGE Badass group that he has to surpass ASAP or die. Why can't the author progress the story through finding out secrets to the world? Stuff left behind in ruins and old ancient tombs? I worry that this will be the the only way things progress for the rest of the story. There are 100s of stories that do this and almost 85%-90% of them are all trash