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2019-02-22 23:25

Started of good, now has gone downhill. Too many fillers 3-4 chapters worth (mostly back and forth between characters with the story not moving forward or anywhere.) For the first time I'm dropping a novel. It had potential but MC became OP too fast and the author became greedy. In my opinion it's not worth spending the spirit stones and if you have subscription its not worth wasting time when you can read other good novels

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SorcererCat
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It is worth reading. So read it if you have nothing else to read. One of the issues with this LN is that the Author is zzzzzzz. The MC gains some SUPER awesome cultivation methods about 400 chapters into the LN. These methods GREATLY and HUGELY increase that stats of a person without requiring them to increase their cultivation-realm-level. Thus boosting any and all future cultivation by crazy amounts. This would allow them to be one of the more powerful races of their Human Alliance that they are in. Even though no one else can go to the cultivation grounds, that were made for these methods, no where was it stated that they were needed. From everything stated they only help in the cultivation of them. They are not needed to cultivate the methods. After he uses them he just forgets about them and lets the die off him is head. Never shares them with his sister, mother, other earthlings that followed him in the past, the only 4 "kinda" sect friends that he has, or the powerful sect that had his back for the last couple hundred chapters where the sect head is now almost his follower. MC now wants to make his own personal sect, but still doesn't give them these awesome training methods. How and in what way can he create this supposed wishfully powerful sect without training/cultivation methods? On top of this the MC has no life at all. He never walks through a city. Never goes to a restaurant. Never, anything. This LN is more like a shell without the peanuts inside. All the cultivation adventures or whatnot are just time-skipped over. You are given a glimpse into the start of it and then time-skip and "Boom, MC's punch finished it off and monster fell to the ground dead" "congratulations MC you have finished this section of the training. You may now leave.". During this time the MC goes from level 1 of this cultivation realm to level 10 of this cultivation realm. And now on the verge of breaking though to the new cultivation realm all in one time-skip.

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