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Nawaabzadah
NawaabzadahLv55yrNawaabzadah

Story is interesting but overall it's quality isn't good. Word arrangement is not good. It feels like written by fifth grade student who's English is not good. Lines are broken. There's no rhythm in story lines.

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Fantasy System

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PhoenixSoaringThe
PhoenixSoaringTheLv3PhoenixSoaringThe

There is more rhythm, grammar, and flow in this book then there is in your review. Just saying before you begin to criticize someone writing a book at least have grammar on par with the author.

Nawaabzadah
NawaabzadahLv5Nawaabzadah

Word grammar is not good at all. You can't differentiate between past present and future. Where you should apply the word "could" you apply "can" You can't even differentiate between ****** problems, How can you translate/write a good story?

Nawaabzadah
NawaabzadahLv5Nawaabzadah

Let me tell you something more which is that in Japanese and Chinese( I don't know about other national languages) there aren't specific words which distinguish past,present, and future conditions. But in English every condition according with or without the time relation has it's own style to be described.

Nawaabzadah:Word grammar is not good at all. You can't differentiate between past present and future. Where you should apply the word "could" you apply "can" You can't even differentiate between ****** problems, How can you translate/write a good story?
Slacott3
Slacott3Lv13Slacott3

You don't know đŸ’© try the new fanfics that are coming out and tell me if you think word arrangement is đŸ’©