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Peak_Plot_Armour
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This review is posted as of Ch.120 Firstly allow to reveal how my stars were allocated for this review Writing Quality- 4 stars For the most part the chapters are clean and proper not a whole lot to pick at other than some misspelling and incorrect pronunciation like there, their, and they’re for example Stability of Updates- 4 stars (with a grain of salt) As I have just complete caught up to the novel I’m not sure if chapters are dropped daily or every other day or even if there is an upload schedule so I’m giving 4 stars for now Story Development- 3.5 stars (basically 4 since I can’t put 3.5) I give a 3.5 because the story really seems rushed at times. And sometimes a sitiuation just seems forced to the point it’s unappealing. But it has its merit when it comes the fight scenes, as they are detailed and interesting. Character Design- 4 stars Not much to say here other than the characters are pretty fleshed out so as there is not much to complain about other than to provide some small details to characters and improve upon them such as providing an interesting background and more detailed in the way they look so as the readers to better visualize some characters. Also like 90% of the lives and weapons MC use is derived from other works (Ex. Naruto, Tenichi, Bleach to name a few) World Background- 2.5 stars (round to 3 I guess) Yea you can probably guess it the world is almost non existent (not very detailed) there really is not much effort put on to describing the land as a whole I’m PERSONALLY very picky about this as I enjoy a detailed world such as what’s there to know about the surrounding kingdoms or the far off kingdoms country’s and continents when you meet a new character from somewhere the author just tells you what kingdom they’re from and leaves it at that we don’t get anymore details about that kingdom or it’s standing unless the MC goes there or has been there I like novels that stress the details on the surrounding nations and such (Ex. Night Ranger, The Great Thief, and Momster paradise to name a few) Finals Verdict - 3.5 stars Ultimately this is a good read so far it’s the MC and the story that keep me reading this while I would like more detail I’m not gonna stop reading because of my high standards and also I would like it if the author could be more creative and bring in more of his own ideas instead of deriving them from other works while it’s ok if they are inspired by outside sources don’t just blatantly copy them (I don’t really mind if the author does this I just wish he would add in more of his own touch) this ends my review give the a book a read if you don’t like it by say ch. 30 maybe drop it or stay until ch.50 to make your choice personally I’m going to keep reading and see where the author takes this story I might update my review another time.

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Peak_Plot_Armour
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Also no need to point it out I know I misspelled a lot. Either blame autocorrect (I typed on my phone) or the fact that I decided to write the review at 4:00Am so I was excessively tired

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when being bad and flashed out with no substitute is still rated in 3's and 4's lmao..