Wow. Just wow this is amazing, this guy really knows how to write a decent story, none of that cringy interactions, the characters actually feel alive,the plot is very deep and the mc is not bad. Now as for the grammer; it’s decent ,minimal errors that your brain corrects subconsciously, you won’t find them unless you are really looking. Keep up the good work my man, people like you are why i read original novels.
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