Review Detail of TrulyAnIdiot in Lost Hope

If you find errors or such in this story please feel free to call me out, if you have any suggestions suggest away and if you just want to criticise to relieve stress go right ahead. I will take criticism in and try to improve this story. All I want to create is a story that will engross you the readers and ultimately entertain you. I hope this will be entertaining for both you and me. I can't promise the perfect story but I will do my best so, thank for reading!