Review Detail of ThyUnknownSaint in Descending Of The Lost Star

It’s a really cute story. I’m in awe with the potential it has. MC is like a Kuudere and Tsundere. Has bad communication skills but is nice. Luru is a pure intelligent girl whose working hard to catch up to MC. Not only that but out of everyone she can see his intentions. But it’s also a very messy story. It seriously needs to be rewritten and polishing. You don’t show but just tell. The Cultivation/Magic System is so confusing. It might need to be rewritten. Why not keep it ******? Cultivator from a galactic era goes into a magic world? The System will sooner or later become one big spider web. This story can be one very deep story. The characters are great with their own background. MC often times remembers his sister. But it all needs to be rewritten better. Take it a bit slow. I think it’s silly for the MC to have his power sealed, isn’t it a bit too late for that? It should had been Katerina to be his teacher instead. And selling the Item box was too much, i was fine with the other things but item box was like advanced technology. I really fell in love with this story and grew attach to the characters. Father treats MC like a princess and he gets mad. None of the family pried on MC but treated him like family.