Review Detail of Tyyx_4u in The Last Human Reincarnates
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I honestly only decided to give it a try because I was bored. It was not that bad. He has good grammar and he understands perfectly, even the dialogues. The bad thing is the interest, I lost the interest to continue reading. The idea is definitely good but the way it was executed can be improved, in my opinion. The cultivation became unnecessarily complex as a concept, sometimes "More" is not always better. The system topic is fun, but I don't see any use for it here. Another negative point is the "advance" of the story according to the chapters. Every thing creeps too much, I don't mean to offend but I'm not a big fan of over-counting words. I don't see any action. Descriptions can improve. Person layout is standard, not bad at all. The development of the world .. was something rare and without "development". Peace and good job!
The Last Human Reincarnates
TReis
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Thanks for the review dude. Actually I'm having problem with the development of this history because English isn't my native language and take me too much time to make it even readable. I think that this need for reviewing always makes me feel like something is missing. So I keep building the universe and not developing the history... But I'm really grateful for your interest
Oh, I understand you. I speak Spanish and I'm definitely bad at English, that's why I use google translate to understand and answer, it is what it is. Thanks for taking the time to respond! Respect you don't delete the review, many cheeky authors erase everything constructive because their little bird brains can't take a criticism. I hope you do well in everything, I'll put this on hold Motivation is something you work on, I've been following a novel for three years XD
TReis:Thanks for the review dude. Actually I'm having problem with the development of this history because English isn't my native language and take me too much time to make it even readable. I think that this need for reviewing always makes me feel like something is missing. So I keep building the universe and not developing the history... But I'm really grateful for your interest