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Chaosneko
ChaosnekoLv146yr
2018-07-21 10:18

A sword and a spear dulewealding? How? A spear requires two hands, did the MC grow a third arm? The spear is a very long weapon, almost always taller than the person using it.

System of gods and devils

Vighnesh_93
3.1
43 Chs

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BleakMammal
BleakMammalLv5

He has cultivation to help him hold it.

6yr
Chaosneko
ChaosnekoLv14

Holding it is not the problem. Besides jabbing (a weak move) all the other moves require two hands.

6yr
Chaosneko
ChaosnekoLv14

https://youtu.be/Ud9Wj8ZnYg4 Chinese Spear Art

6yr
CIoudhawk
CIoudhawkLv5

I also thought it was nonsense also having a spear make the sword useless as the spear is longer and am sure it's uncomfortable af.

6yr
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Lord_haden
Lord_hadenLv12

You actually let your fans down for profit you could have just made a patreon and moust of us whould donate for you but u just had to be greedy.. well not my problem anymore ill just black list you. Fuck reading your novels when you do this to people who vote daily and always folowed your novel since day one. Biggest disapointment after brexit and donald trump

6yr

Waffleman44
Waffleman44Lv15

When you write a bunch of chapters that was free to read then later on put it into another platform to have to pay to read them is disappointing. If you needed money you could have made paetron or another donation place.

6yr
Vighnesh_93
Vighnesh_93Author

Reveal spoiler

6yr
MiniLicht
MiniLichtLv13

Huft, truly disappointing. Just say u can continue to update a new chapter, but how about the other reader who new to this. do they have to buy it in Amazon. Amazing plan tho. ^^b

6yr
Vighnesh_93
Vighnesh_93Author

It's really funny that when my novel went normal most of them didn't even bother to review and now when I got him came flying like a fly and flood the reviews. Does it feels good to de-rate someone. There was a saying that a coward only hits a dead snake to feel empowered. Looking at you I feel that way.

6yr
Gabeeee
GabeeeeLv10

Its funny how the cover of this novel in amazon says "300.000 reader in webnovel". lol Even though there is 300k readers, the future reader will have to start to read at ch 43?? I wonder if that 300k will still raise knowing that the novel that they are reading will have to start at that chapter... But is it really necessary to shout out loud in the cover that it has 300k readers..? If it is really that good the word will spread even without blatantly saying that is has that kind of number of readers because for a novel... that is really small number of reader y'know?

6yr
Legionnaire_Dusk
Legionnaire_DuskLv15

Posting on one site/app while signing contracts to sell forcing the removal of it from source with no notice of warning WHILE still posting and updating it only to remove it. This is the exact type of Author that quickly dies and loses any and all supporters.

6yr
Ninjatfat
NinjatfatLv14

This novel is legit amazing. Comedy, character development, fast pace. The only thing which would make this novel more amazing would be to no include a harem. SPOLIER - Currently the has a OP wife, if this were to turn into a harem you know their relationship development would become slow run of the mill novel relationship. If the MC were to stay loyal to his wife I just feel like the story would progress better

6yr
Despair_or_hope
Despair_or_hopeLv10

This story has a very good potential. I`m adding this into my library. I hope you will release more chapters. Good luck.....................

6yr
Vighnesh_93
Vighnesh_93Author

Guys if hate those internet bullies then please flood my reviews!!!!¡!!¡!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bullies die for ever and rot in hell

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