Review Detail of Aloe_Jason in Once Human, Now a Parasite

I am not good in writing reviews, mainly due to my english. But I wanted to give you encouragement TheCrow. I love the family dynamic in your novel, the world building and the epic fights! i mean none of the novels i have read have fricking +4 universes with interesting differences and connections. i am hyped to find out what will happen next! I love the three brother thing you have created between the joker, the nameless night and arthur, because it is not like the typical 1 vs the univers and he somehow wins. The lore is also very interessting with the gods and how everything happend. The one thing i kind of dislike is the jumping around between objectivs. it feels like the MCs objektive is being pushed around in the arc and their sub-arc. Another thing i would hope for more often is that the MC and the crew get a break. i know there are some chill parts in the story like the wedding but they are so small. i mean the wedding was like 3 chapters at most. I myself would love to have a bit more description about the characters other than their hair colour (lol). Yes, arthur and lucy have been described quite well. but people like Gutcha, who i quite like, has almost no description about him other than his face looking ugly. I think the story would be even more enjoyable when the enimies would have a deeper description. you can mabye decribe their face more or what they are wearing. All in all I love your story! It has so much potencial! Lots of love Aloe! PS: Don´t be discuraged from those 1 Star "the story is ****"-reviews PSS: I am very sorry about my bad english