Most chapters are long enough comparable to 'novels posted in NU' and it is a good binge reading for a couple of days. The plot and the world building are impeccable to the point of 'there is an actual thought behind some events that may lead to some future developments and may be in the next couple of arcs'. However, there is some inconsistency in the MC's character development like his past trauma that hugely affect his trust of other people especially women, and no clear progression in which or what way his character will end up to be, either he is good or bad. So far, he stands in the neutral side of things and he just wants to be with his loved ones. One thing that I really love about this novel is the way how the author solve the OPness early on in the novel. I thought that the OPness will remain throughout the novel like convenient powerups to deal with the villains head on. Thank goodness that it isn't. There is still the worry that I felt as a reader towards the MC and co. whenever a villain much much stronger than them appears despite of the OPness reavealed early on in the novel. *There are rarely few misspells spanning across the novel but the story is still easily understandable. I am thoroughly heavily invested in this novel and I want to see it to its end. Good luck Crow in writing this until the end and in school!
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LIKEIn one of the chapter you said the soul link gives her 80%prrcent of his power and at the same time 40 or 60% of the power she gets to him but after she got stronger than him and ranks up he didn’t even get an ounce of power wtf is this leeching now that’s she stronger than him why doesn’t he get some power from her rank up it even says he gets some of her power too
Oh and why does the leeched Lucy only gets power when Arthur ranks up in power but when Lucy rank up on power herself why doesn’t he get any this is just dumb
Ky4ler:In one of the chapter you said the soul link gives her 80%prrcent of his power and at the same time 40 or 60% of the power she gets to him but after she got stronger than him and ranks up he didn’t even get an ounce of power wtf is this leeching now that’s she stronger than him why doesn’t he get some power from her rank up it even says he gets some of her power too