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Review Detail of Harvald in Once Human, Now a Parasite

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Harvald
HarvaldLv55yrHarvald

The story has many to the reader forced moments. If the author has an idea he does it as easy as possible, even breaking established character behaviour. His power ups are correlating to the plot the MC has 40000+ Intelligence, but it doesn't improve his IQ even a bit. The auction house scene was so forced just to progress the plot,that I wished I could have strangled the MC and that he just takes the first random beautiful girl with a similar background as him as his girlfriend was cringe worthy. I'm actually hoping each chapter that she just dies off, which obviously will never happen. The main reason is they both act as 13 year old ***** teenagers even with their tortured past and she is used as a reason to make him soft. I read the story only because I have nothing left at the moment I'd personally rate this story around 2.8, but with many unjustified 5 stars in my opinion. I lowered my rating world from background 3 character design 2 and update stability 5. By the way I think 5 stars total are too much for most stories on this site and the stars are overinflated for liked stories, which is sad because stars lose their meaning this way.

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Once Human, Now a Parasite

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TheCrow
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Thanks for the review, have a good night/day!

Octaeon
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After all, the intelligence of the MC would be limited by the intelligence of the author.