Review Detail of KingoftheWorld in Cleaning Up The Future
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Quality-wise: The novel actually has a lot of punctuational and descriptional errors, therefore, I rated 3 stars. I suggest that the author uses Grammarly, It will improve the overall writing quality of the novel. Story: The story is still confusing with only 3 chapters out. Therefore it's still too early to judge whether it's good or bad so I rated it 3 stars. Neither too high or too low. Character Design: The characters are fleshed out at the start. We know some of Sia and Sid's (Main Characters I think?) traits so I gave 4 stars World Building: As for this we somehow know that Sia (MC) traveled to the future from an accident. Apparently, there are colonies and space travels in this story, so it is a definite outer space and sci-fi novel. However, again the novel only has few chapters out so it's really difficult to rate this right now so I just balanced it out to 3 stars. I'll revise my review in the future depending on the progress of the novel.
Cleaning Up The Future
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Thank you for the honest review. I think the following chapters will clear up any confusion about what is going on. Unfortunately, it isn't an outer space novel. Do you find outer space novels more exciting? The story includes technological advancements, altered societies, altered environments, and time travel types of science fiction. I hope you enjoy those too. I will definitely look into improving the writing quality of this novel. I hope you continue reading this in the future.
Actually, I'm not really into sci-fi. I just wanted to leave a good review and to inform other readers of what kind of genre it is. Well, I apologize for that haha. Anyway, these things that you said has a resemblance to the novel "I have a Mansion in the apocalyptic World". You should try reading that novel if you haven't read it. You could get some ideas there to help you on your novel.
23DN4L:Thank you for the honest review. I think the following chapters will clear up any confusion about what is going on. Unfortunately, it isn't an outer space novel. Do you find outer space novels more exciting? The story includes technological advancements, altered societies, altered environments, and time travel types of science fiction. I hope you enjoy those too. I will definitely look into improving the writing quality of this novel. I hope you continue reading this in the future.