Great novel but I feel the plot development is too fast so pls can you slow it down a notch with a little more in depth development and also when he is giving out techniques and weapons (even though it means nothing to him) he shouldn’t give it out casually they should work for it so that they would know the value of it and also the romance is rushed what the hell is there meeting was by fate and then after that you like each other and she becomes your wife.... Generally the novel is great but the plot feels rushed and isn’t going in depth with the development, it would be a lot better if the author takes his time to build the plot and not rush them... also GET WELL SOON AUTHOR
KingoftheWorld
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LIKEHello there my reader, I don't think that you really read the past chapters as I clearly stated in a passage that our MC clearly IS NOT in love "yet" to our female lead. I also clearly stated that there was only a "spark" between the two of them and that he only liked her, not love. Also if you read back, the "wife" thing was for a joke for our female lead, it just to tease her. Anyway thanks for the review and thanks for reading!
Lol I know what you tried to make it mysterious but we know how they would end up and when I said the wife part I wasn’t talking about when he was with her i am talking about when he went off announcing to her brother and the girl he wanted to make an elder in his sect that she is his future wife....
KingoftheWorld:Hello there my reader, I don't think that you really read the past chapters as I clearly stated in a passage that our MC clearly IS NOT in love "yet" to our female lead. I also clearly stated that there was only a "spark" between the two of them and that he only liked her, not love. Also if you read back, the "wife" thing was for a joke for our female lead, it just to tease her. Anyway thanks for the review and thanks for reading!