It has potential, i cant say much as i have only read up to chapter 4. So i think i'll give my impression so far. The story is good, it would be better if you explain it in more detail. The character is not bad, i find them cute and interesting. I say that its not bad, just need more details and dont rush it. Keep it up!! đ
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