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LustDaoist
LustDaoistAuthor5yrLustDaoist

hello I'm the author of this book so I'm going to be a little biased towards my own book. I'm trying to make a kingdom building book but with a little twist. in till I get the first 10 chapters out I'm not going to add a synopsis because it will just spoil the plot. also if anyone has any cool ideas or thinks I should add anything to the story I always take suggestions. it would be like we as a community are writing a novel together. I'm always reading comments.

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Building The Lotus Empire (its back)

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Miaow_Meow
Miaow_MeowLv4Miaow_Meow

good luck bro... hope this novel little blind arrogant youngmaster antagonist. make enemy little smart

Miaow_Meow
Miaow_MeowLv4Miaow_Meow

i mean add quality enemy. yeah we need little mob. but add better quality mob 😀

Miaow_Meow:good luck bro... hope this novel little blind arrogant youngmaster antagonist. make enemy little smart
LustDaoist
LustDaoistAuthorLustDaoist

Thanks for the feedback but I’m going to add 4 short chapters of background for the main antagonist and the mob characters you don’t eaven have to worry about them it’s a bit too soon. I’m going to be adding a few fun things watch out for them

Miaow_Meow:i mean add quality enemy. yeah we need little mob. but add better quality mob 😀
viko96
viko96Lv15viko96

No harem pls, no excessive *** scenes, dont be the one author thats willing to sacrifice the plot for *** sells, try to build character that's respect other if he gets respected and look down on other people if they do it first something like that , :)

LustDaoist
LustDaoistAuthorLustDaoist

I promise that there will be ass little *** as possible but the *** you will see is not the type you were expectingđŸ€«

viko96:No harem pls, no excessive *** scenes, dont be the one author thats willing to sacrifice the plot for *** sells, try to build character that's respect other if he gets respected and look down on other people if they do it first something like that , :)
LizodIDK
LizodIDKLv12LizodIDK

A***... I, Lizod the pervert, am disappointed... most original novels in this site have single girl romance... and the ones that do have harem are the ones that you barely know what the hell is going on half the time

LustDaoist:I promise that there will be ass little *** as possible but the *** you will see is not the type you were expectingđŸ€«
LustDaoist
LustDaoistAuthorLustDaoist

I’m going to add a harem but not the normal kind of harem 😉 the women will all be in power and have more control then most of my characters

LizodIDK:A***... I, Lizod the pervert, am disappointed... most original novels in this site have single girl romance... and the ones that do have harem are the ones that you barely know what the hell is going on half the time
Chris_Matte
Chris_MatteLv4Chris_Matte

what book there's nothing here