Review Detail of bryan32 in Building The Lotus Empire (its back)

Item: Building The Lotus Empire (its back)
Rating: 3.4

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La historia es buena, pero la gramática casi no se entiende Pon mas esfuerzo :) Puedes hacerlo mucho mejor Tu puedes :) Y que se mas largo cada capitulo

Building The Lotus Empire (its back)

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Okay I’ll take it. I’ll try harder but do understand that this is my first time writing a story and I will get better as time goes on.

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