Review Detail of Dtsnap in Macha's Journey
Review detail
Quick Pros and Cons PROS: Cute story idea. Nice start to a romance. CONS: Poorly developed MC. World building needs development. Story and character needs work. ex. The MC reactions to a different world are unrealistic. Accepts situations too easily and author never explains why. CONCLUSION: Good romantic story idea, execution needs a lot of work! Reads like a first draft.
Macha's Journey
BabyTanuki
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Thanks for the input. I prefer to keep the MC's reactions how they are, but am interested in what sorts of world building you would like to see. I try to add one thing every chapter. Do you want a more detailed description of the scenery or more magical items? I will try to go back and edit in explanations for her easy acceptance. I am always up to suggestions. Thanks!
BabyTanuki:Thanks for the input. I prefer to keep the MC's reactions how they are, but am interested in what sorts of world building you would like to see. I try to add one thing every chapter. Do you want a more detailed description of the scenery or more magical items? I will try to go back and edit in explanations for her easy acceptance. I am always up to suggestions. Thanks!