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BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthor5yrBabyTanuki

Author here: This is my first time writing a novel and I hope you like it. Although it is a romance, I will also have action scenes. I will be checking the comments from the day before so feel free to share your thoughts. Thanks! Also, please like the comment to make sure it stays at the top.

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Macha's Journey

BabyTanuki

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Ruler1
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If you want people to read you book, make a better synopsis. In every novel the protagonist meets people and make friends. Try to make the synopsis original and give the story some context. Until then I won't read this book because it seems generic.

BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

Alright. Thanks for your input I will go work on that right now.

Ruler1:If you want people to read you book, make a better synopsis. In every novel the protagonist meets people and make friends. Try to make the synopsis original and give the story some context. Until then I won't read this book because it seems generic.
Lonely_citizen
Lonely_citizenLv13Lonely_citizen

u said ‘lovers’ what do u mean by that, or is it a typo

BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

No it isn't a typo...Macha has a very long journey.

Lonely_citizen:u said ‘lovers’ what do u mean by that, or is it a typo
BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

Not a harem though!

Lonely_citizen:u said ‘lovers’ what do u mean by that, or is it a typo
Lonely_citizen
Lonely_citizenLv13Lonely_citizen

Thank god

BabyTanuki:Not a harem though!
ions32483248
ions32483248Lv11ions32483248

thank you for writing a wonderful story. keep it up

BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

Thanks for the words of encouragement. I always worry if you guys are enjoying it or not. People rarely write comments and no one writes reviews. I am just writing for fun, so glad you enjoy it.

RedLaw
RedLawLv13RedLaw

So she will have many Boyfriends ? Or will she go from breakup to breakup ?

BabyTanuki:Thanks for the words of encouragement. I always worry if you guys are enjoying it or not. People rarely write comments and no one writes reviews. I am just writing for fun, so glad you enjoy it.
BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

Definitely not a harem. I'm not into her having a lot of boyfriends at once. Can't say it is always a breakup that will separate them... it is a dangerous world...

RedLaw:So she will have many Boyfriends ? Or will she go from breakup to breakup ?
RedLaw
RedLawLv13RedLaw

Ah !! So death of loved ones. Will it have yuri ?

BabyTanuki:Definitely not a harem. I'm not into her having a lot of boyfriends at once. Can't say it is always a breakup that will separate them... it is a dangerous world...
BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

Sorry. Probably not. 😅 I do have characters who swing that way, but Macha doesn't. I don't want to say never, but if I do it wouldn't be for long (story isn't set in stone and plan on doing this for a long time)

RedLaw:Ah !! So death of loved ones. Will it have yuri ?
RedLaw
RedLawLv13RedLaw

Hum too bad... but oh well count me in.

BabyTanuki:Sorry. Probably not. 😅 I do have characters who swing that way, but Macha doesn't. I don't want to say never, but if I do it wouldn't be for long (story isn't set in stone and plan on doing this for a long time)
FluffyMehMeh
FluffyMehMehLv5FluffyMehMeh

D-death of loved ones... I'll need to consider this point properly before I start. 😅

BabyTanuki:Definitely not a harem. I'm not into her having a lot of boyfriends at once. Can't say it is always a breakup that will separate them... it is a dangerous world...
BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

Yes, I figured I would give that away early. I don't want people to be angry when it happens. I will explore their loves thought first. If you fall in love with the first guy you might be happy with the ending. That is all I will say though. The ending will take a very long time to get to though.

FluffyMehMeh:D-death of loved ones... I'll need to consider this point properly before I start. 😅
asura_lord
asura_lordLv6asura_lord

What is the ig

BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

machasjourney

asura_lord:What is the ig
SpiderWillow
SpiderWillowLv14SpiderWillow

Do you have a reason for using &quot when characters are speaking instead of using “.....”

BabyTanuki
BabyTanukiAuthorBabyTanuki

could you direct me to the area? Not sure where you are talking about >.<*

SpiderWillow:Do you have a reason for using &quot when characters are speaking instead of using “.....”
SpiderWillow
SpiderWillowLv14SpiderWillow

In some of the chapters at the beginning and spread out when characters are speaking the symbols " doesn't show. Instead the word & quot appears. But I just realized that it might be a problem with the website because in my previous comment I ment to say " reason for using & quot" but it got corrected to the symbols instead.

BabyTanuki:could you direct me to the area? Not sure where you are talking about >.<*