Review Detail of lynerparel in Macha's Journey

OK so I know I just read up to chapter 27, and what can I say but this novel is nice. Unlike most of the originals here including mine, the writing quality is impeccable. The stability of the updates is good, as evidence by how many chapters this novel has. The story development is in a pace that's good, just not my kinda pace. I like very fast pace works, but because if one writer does that he couldn't write good developments, that's why this pacing is the best kind, but not really my ideal. The character design is good, I can actually imagine and feel what the characters look like, as if I was there myself. The world background at the point I'm reading is not really there yet, but I'm sure that reading on, the world would open up and bring me into a world of wonder and fantasy. Overall this book shouldn't be stuck in it's current rank it's a book worthy of being the top 30 or dare I say in the top 15 way higher than my work. :)