The read was fluent but there’s some words that doesn’t fit and sometimes doesn’t make sense. The uploads were consistent at first but dwindled as the story progressed. Chapters got shorter and can feel that the life in the story is no more in later chapters. The betrayal #2 was so bad making the MCs dominant figure turn into a dumb idiot who can’t get a hint. The expectations from the begging were died down. Even the author knew what was wrong and now it got dropped. The ending wasn’t even satisfying because now I want to see more. I hope the series can get a continuation at least not until people forget that this actually existed because I’ve lost interest on things I used to love but now don’t even care to take a look at due to waiting too long.
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