Review Detail of David_Tieku in Rebirth of the Entertainment Giant

I like the novel keeps pulling out more caps

Whats with the descript? Need discord?

If you have given a power stone to the novel you can claim early access to the next chapter through the discord server

Discord................. NO

It's really good pls continue updating

Hi, I'll leave my feedback here. (12 Chapters In) Feedback: Grammar - There are quite a few grammatical errors in the story, but it's nothing major. There's some punctuation missing for dialogue as well, but it's nothing some editing can't fix. Style - Your sentences could be structured to flow better. Some of them have too many clauses or too many thoughts in a sentence. What I liked about the story: Clever MC - I liked the references and ideas he takes from modern-day Earth, and how he uses them to constructs logical plans. Classic Proving One's Worth - MC has to rebuild his family's reputation, etc. Face Slapping - Not really something I thoroughly enjoy, but it is satisfying. Final Thoughts : Although I don't really like these genres of novels, you seem to be going in the right direction. Keep it up and good luck!

Thanks for the advice will go over and improve

Will it have romantic subplot/harem❤💕💕?

Can't reveal too much as I haven't really decided anything definite yet but I can say harem is currently not on the list but romance maybe but not sure yet

Love it plz keep updating

It's not bad for the first time and thanks because i quite enjoyed reading it.

Keep the good work 😍😘😘😘😘😘

And please keep updating

need more updates..

Me too..

Thanks!

Does this novel have harem?? PLEASE SAY NO!!

Can't reveal too much as I haven't really decided anything definite yet but I can say harem is currently not on my list of ideas

Thank you. Now i'm definitely going to read it!

I like this type of novel. I love to read but cant seem to write a finish product.... Great Job