Review Detail of merchantoperator in The Rise

Item: The Rise
Rating: 5

Review detail

merchantoperatorLv25yrmerchantoperator

I really like the story so far. The characters are also pretty good. I really like stories that have a lot of strategy in them so I'm exicted to see how that will play out in this story. The only problem I have is how small the stakes are for the MC. Becoming the student council president isn't a huge goal. If however he was doing with real life impact, I think it would be a lot more fun.

The Rise

King_of_Crowns

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King_of_CrownsAuthorKing_of_Crowns

Thank you for the feedback - really appreciated. You are absolutely right the stakes are currently low, however I like to imagine that later in the story the importance of the position will become clearer and stakes higher. I will definitely take your advise into consideration its an important point.

5yr

TheTwelthTowerLv3TheTwelthTower

Hey Merchantoperator, I think the review has a slight spoiler (with the student council president thing). If you like, you can re-post the review but just turn on the spoiler option when writing the review so people can be alerted before hand :).

5yr