Review Detail of Kingoftheland in Bridge of Solitude

The story itself is good, didn't expect this from a school setting. Pretty good read, my only issue is wow your chapters a long, like its awesome cause most writers on this site write like 2 words and leave it at that. But it is also overwhelming to read. Like it felt like 2-3 chapters in one, making it hard to continue cause the next chapters were sometimes even longer would recommend doing long then short chapter. Cause 1st chapter loved it wanted to binge read through it before going sleep but the sheer length of your chapters made it impossible.