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Okay let's start of with the fact that i'm only at chapter 2 and i've found a heap of things that are quirky and /need/ to be fixed. So far the MC has: 1) Foolishly triggered a legend 2) Transmigrated into a forest 3) Gotten out of the forest 4) Stolen clothes with money magically inside 5) Went to eat at an Inn dressed in male clothes and almost got cheated because she wasn't aware of the currency 6) Set up foreign trade within a month with a 'wealthy' target audience 7) Set up a jewellery business within a year that prospered because of, honeslty i have no idea but i'm going to assume, the uniqueness of the design? and her apparently foreign futuristic knowledge that is not elaborated Um... sorry but am I the only who thinks that it's a bit extremely unrealistic? First of all why tf would someone purposely trigger a legend that's been said to happen? Does she want to get spirited away that badly? Is she not sad at all that she's seperated from her former life once she's arrived? She didn't even panic at all???? Aside from her 'OMG I TRAVELLED THROUGH TIME AND SPACE THIS IS SO COOL, oh wait i might've just travelled to another place and landed in a forest. Welp let's look for a way out first and not care about the rest yeah?' Literally. I cannot believe it. What??? Fiction gone overboard. Next, how did she make it out of the forest without a guide within the day? Or not within the day. Not stated. Unless the city/town was near the forest then you can ignore this. If not within the day what did she survive on? In her school uniform nonetheless? Or not school uniform? Not stated. Which brings me to my next point, /how did the guards not stop her when she first came in/??? She came in via loophole? The guard patrol is that much of a failure??? Wouldn't the town be overrun by wild animals or bandits at this rate??? You're saying that just because she stole someone's clothes that she was able to just walk in without suspicion? /Where is she getting a change of clothes if she had to steal them the first time?/ It also makes no sense that someone would wash and dry their clothes and not realize they have money inside, where would the money even be kept? Ancient times have no pockets yo, no one would put their money out hanging in the open yo. If the money were bank notes wouldn't they have been destroyed during the washing? It would make sense if they took everything out first right? since it's made out of paper. If you're saying that they left coins outside. What. How. It's going to create a visible bulge and pulling of fabric that others would have taken the chance to steal it before the MC. Also the weight would definitely make the owner suspect what's inside and take it out right? It's too coincidental. This is a good place to learn about sleeves and clothing in ancient china: https://fouryearsofshades.tumblr.com/post/66107374124/ooc-what-is-with-asians-and-thosesleeves See. No pockets. So where. Additionally they usually keep their money in pouches which are sometimes tied to their sash thing or kept in the V fold of their clothes (from my meager knowledge because google didn't give me what i was looking for) so what even. Place to learn of money (based off Tang Dynasty): https://***.travelchinaguide.com/intro/focus/currency2.htm Coins. Weight. Not a lot with just a few coins. Definitely not a years worth of earnings (according to what the person who sold her food said) A string of coins? Even more obvious. Paper bills? Already torn/ruined during washing. 🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️ Also, while it's still within reason to buy foreign goods (as long as she's near a port or smth, makes no sense to buy it from other merchants since they'll likely have the same idea as her and sell it for a sky high price, but then again if she's near port how did she land in a forest and not notice the maybe nearby ocean, or did the author mean 'within the piece of land called China and not with other pieces of land across the sea' kind of foreign trade?), how does she come to know of 'wealthy customers'? How does she interact with her supplier? Do they just automatically go to her and go 'I want to buy/sell goods'??? She doesn't even know the unit of money? Where would the connections come from? Is she selling it via street stall or an actual shop? If actual shop, the money to rent/buy and furnish a space isn't cheap. Was she cheated of money considering what happened the first time she tried to pay for her food? I dunno man, how can you guys even read this without realising. This isn't a case of 'English is not my first language' anymore, it's a case of top many loopholes and the author being too anxious to move on to where they deem it's important and not care about the minor details. Note: All the above happened in TWO chapters This story has potential, but really? Author please. I don't even know how this made itself into the charts???? This is a very serious case of selective blindness. I'm not trying to flame, but loopholes make a story very dubious. This story at chapter two is very dubious.