I really liked the beginning of this, story, and the synopsis was very hooking. I think it would be good to add some more suspense at the end f chapters though! but otherwise, please update soon, I need to read more!
Thank you so much for the tip!!! Suspense at the end of a chapter, haven't really thought about that. I'll give it a shot!
And also, thank you so much for enjoying the chapter and giving a review, this really gives new authors like me more confidence to write a story!đ