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2018-12-19 23:31

At chapter 8 there are almost nothing on the world background, the only thing we know is that the MC is in the forest near or in a human kingdom and is near a village. The update ...... Last chapter was made 4 months ago so I think the author dropped (and he was right) The writing quality is good but the author write a lot of stup*d things (he is unreliable and write a lot of illogical things) He even forgot to write informations often thus leading to WTF situation. Since the writing quality is confusing the character disign and story development su.cks Exemple: -the MC can summon an infinity of minions at his location and he has an ability to transform people into minions and the only restriction is he need MP to do that ..... But out of nowhere he comes with a limited number of slots for his minions (The thing here is that in the skill description, the MC have no limit compare with others who have the same skill but with a limit in the description,l but it's probably just the author forgetting to write one) - The MC wants to begin a vampire race and he wants to start with transforming a village population into vampire.... But in all the MC can only have 10 minions and minions's minions so I hope for the MC that the village is a little village of max ten people (which is obviously not a little but a medium if not a big one) -The MC can create high level vampire (pure blood noble vampire) but they lack basic skills like nightvision , blood sensitivity (to sense blood) which every vampire should have ... and even ones you expected to see in high rank ones like regeneration or blood manipulation. -The MC is fan of p.o.r.n books (at first I was thinking it was a bad "joke" but the MC seems to really love this book) And some others stuffs ... In only 8 chapters it is a lot (and believe me when I said there are more than just that) so I dropped it without wanting to go further. (Not that I don't pardon some errors from the author but too much is too much ...... And it's the foundation of his novel not some random things)

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