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Review Detail of DeJeL in Zombie Hunter

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DeJeL
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*This review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I suggest that you get an editor, there is many errors in your grammar in chapter(s) 1(-2). I am bad at such myself or I’d help out. Also I can’t see enough of whether this is going to be a good story off the first 5 chaps, I really like to have more story by this point. Positive Feedback: Good character build up and a nice story Idea. Keep up the good notes of what you are doing.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will continue this at another time to see whether I like this book or not, as I said, the first 5 chaps aren’t enough. However, If why I am keeping this in my library turns out to be true, I will really enjoy this novel, while if not, than I doubt that I will stick around past chapter 20. Now please don’t let what people say (including myself) stop you from finishing what you started.;,;.

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Zombie Hunter

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