Review Detail of in The Mech Touch

[Haven’t read the novel yet] I don’t know how I should feel about this review lol, I keep getting distracted by your grammar but the shocking revelation of the system “becoming a cat” and purring, This review truly makes me speechless. But thank you for the time and effort put into writing this!

It is funny that you criticize the author for his grammar (generally pretty decent) when yours is quite bad. I will agree that Ves can be frustrating though as he refuses to take a stand against those that will so often screw him early on, but eventually he does get tired of it and the novel starts moving in very different direction, with Ves becoming a stronger MC. At least his relationships with those that dominated him become more balanced or are entirely abandoned.

There is a cat and there is a System, but they are different characters (yes, the system can be considered almost a character in this novel).

Even funnier is that you assume English is my first language. Guess what, it isn't! And how is Ves still being dominated? He broke the relationship not only with the Bright Republic, but with every State, becoming quite paranoid about it even. Gloriana doesn't dominate him either, he has imposed his opinions over hers several times, their relationship became quite balanced, specially when you take into account she is a Hexer nut. Calabast hasn't been dominant in their relationship in quite a while as well. The only one that still has a stronger hold on Ves at this point would be his mother, I guess, but she is nearing the power of a god at this point, so I think it is excusable?

stay read bro,,, start is kinda sad cause ves is always on weak side, read

You obviously haven’t read a majority of this novel. Exlor has extremely good grammar compared to 99% of the other trash on this app. Exlor actually wrote something worth reading particularly because Ves has weaknessess and he experiences loss on a regular basis. If you aren’t able to write complete sentances, how are you able to even understand whether or not someone else has good grammar? It’s laughable. Honestly “the mech touch” is one of maybe 10 novels actually worth reading on this app and it deserves respect.

I hope you didn’ actually take this rediculous review to heart.t

Hahahaha, OK :)

this went on for 1 year...

To clarify your inane review. 1. Grammar does not get worse down the line, you made that up. 2. MC is constantly taken advantage of. How does that make it "not a good novel"? There's a reason why it has the Weak To Strong tag. 3. Filler words? You just feel that way because you scroll down 10 chapters a minute skimming for action, Ves is a mech designer, not a mech pilot. Of course the story is going to have chapters about how he designs his mechs or his daily life. So yeah, you can rage over it all you want, it still doesn't make this a bad novel.

4k chapters is a telenovela and not a novel, but that's just my opinion! author found a golden goose and it's not going to get rid of/finish it ಠಿ⁠_⁠ಠ

I'd have to disagree this story was clearly meant to be long from the beginning. If you just compare the avg age of the masters/star designers to the pace the story has always been progressing at its really clear this story was built to last from the beginning