Review Detail of noBiggie in The Mech Touch

Yeah, the vandal arc is ridiculously long, we get 400 chapters of more or less what the story promises to be, a guy designing mechs and running a mech company, followed by 500 chapters (AND STILL COUNTING) of the guy going for years and years through some war, where 80% of all those years are spent doing philosophical debates and mental gymnastics to make his bad decisions seem less bad, while floating through space. I can not count how many chapters the author spends on the guy just ranting, a fictional character ranting, to himself, about fictional ****, mostly the same fictional ****, in an infinite loop. His 1 man philosophical debates never end, they just increase in volume as the story progresses, it does nothing to progress the story, it's not really character development anymore (I mean at the start they kinda were, where he had some major epiphanies and ****, but now he just rants and rants and doesn't reach any sorts of conclusions...) it's just like a bunch of filler text. Personally I think the story is somewhat bearable if you just skip over most of these mental gymnastics, and if you read 700 chapters of it you can't deny it's interesting right? The worldbuilding is pretty great... It doesn't happen until finally in like chapters 860-870 where we get to the part that this entire war arc has been building up towards... The climax is in sight, finally after all this time. But the end of his military career isn't, he's been promised a position in some super secret mech design team after his time with the vandals ends, god knows where that leads (another 400 chapters of philosophical debates maybe?) This whole military career thing is like a huge detour from the main story, the main plot. A detour so huge that it's got more chapters dedicated to it than the entire main storyline has had up till this point. Honestly, the problem isn't that the plot or story or anything is particularly bad, it's just bad writing, the author doesn't know how to pace his story at all.

I agree it was great at the beginning but somewhere in the middle the writing start to deteriorated. I was okay with it at first. Some sentences feels out of places or poor choices of words which makes it harder to read for me but I still excited about ves mech building including the spiritual stuff. And then it got worse. Everything got worst espcially the war arc. The plot is stupid, some New characters is pretty mediocre, most dialogue is bad, ves keep ranting about the same thing in different situations and the author is trying unrelated topic into story which piss me off. And I started to begin the spiritual thing is bad idea and stupid concept cuz then I have to read ves trying explain or ranting the same bull**** ves said before in previous ch and Oh the fight writing is bad as well. Why? Because the author keep killing the momentum during fight by droping info dump in middle of fights! And worse shouting killing moves names!. These nonsense wasn't in the early chapter. Also should vandal act more professionally since they are also part of military even thought their rejects. Their author make vandal more like pirate in middle ages which make them more out place in the futuristic world I know the author want protrayed them as bad people I okay with it but it be better if they communicated similar in call of duty characters. And that it's I'm done complaining.