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YoungReaperXLv55yr
2018-12-23 04:09

The story is good and all but you must always check your grammar and see if the words make sense or correct so you dont get bad reviews about your grammar but hey I think your doing well with it your grammar its not but 8/10 👍. Even though I'm writing a bad reviews about your grammar I'm sorry 😅. And I hope to have more chapters, like I just read both of the pages in 20 mins like I'm bored now. 2 chapters isn't enough to satisfy me so I need more chapters but don't rush it though you can take your time ok. And that's my review lol. 😂

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