Review Detail of Ketchup_Stain in Battle of Ascension
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I have not been more confused on the stupidity of an author than the time I read the Communist Manifesto. The author’s inability to create a good Mc has left me with many questions. The world that the story takes is an amazing background for character development, even more so sense the use of stats literally means constant progression should be a thing. But as I read further I have found myself sincerely wishing for the MC to die a horribly death by Rabbit horn impalement. The MC has the intelligence of a retarded goldfish and has displayed no ability or courage whatsoever. Even his own AI helper thinks he’s stupid and will often make it known. Seriously, Author , please increase his IQ by at least 60.
Battle of Ascension
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But by chapter 100 your IQ has dropped to levels so unprecedentedly low that you can't even recognize whether it was the MC who got smarter or you who got dumber. I was honestly disappointed in the story since it had a really nice premise, but an MC who was so stupid it was somewhat of a miracle that he even knew how to breathe in the first place, the plot armor placed on him is so thick that not even a supernova can put a dent in it (given that he has literally made enemies of every single powerful organization save for people like merchants or town guards) plus the fact that all the side characters are poorly developed. Like actually there were so many things that could have made the story worthwhile if every character had an extra 5 brain cells.
SorcererCat:The MC does get smarter and does a lot better the further into the story you go. However, that is after around chapter 100+ ish.
