Review Detail of Tyler89558 in Battle of Ascension
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To describe this novel I believe it would be accurate to say it's the equivalent of eating a frozen meal from the dollar store long after it has passed its expiration date. The MC has less intelligence than an ant and balls smaller than a hydrogen atom, want a little more detail on these descriptions? He hunted level 1 rabbits until he reached level 14, he didn't use his AI and failed to properly utilize his advantages by either forgetting to activate or deactivate said advantages. To top it all off while he was leveling his AI helper, instead of leveling her up as he leveled up he felt he needed to wait until he could just mass level it up to where he wants it. That's just the tip of the iceberg as well. Somehow he meets a woman who magically falls in love with him after hearing that he literally hunted rabbits for the entirety of his existence, he let his mother name his guild some completely idiotic name, and he is basically on the hit list of every powerful organization except for the strictly neutral organizations like merchants or town guards. He's essentially protected by plot armor the whole way through and the villains are so one dimensional that you can almost predict the entire story line. Considering there are other free novels which are far better than this, like there are better options for getting food than buying some television dinner from the dollar store, this novel probably isn't worth your time.
Battle of Ascension
HotIce
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You should change, "isn't worth your time" to "isn't worth my time" in the last of your review as everyone have different opinions. Thanks for the read ^^ Even though you gave me 1 star, I should say thanks to you as you explained my shortcomings in your review and not like others who said nonsense then gave 1 star. Thanks again for the read ^^
I’m surprised yet happy to see you take the criticism to heart and maybe will try to learn from it. :)
HotIce:You should change, "isn't worth your time" to "isn't worth my time" in the last of your review as everyone have different opinions. Thanks for the read ^^ Even though you gave me 1 star, I should say thanks to you as you explained my shortcomings in your review and not like others who said nonsense then gave 1 star. Thanks again for the read ^^
I am purely reviewing the novel for what it's worth, I don't believe that I claimed to be able to write better, but that doesn't mean I can't bash on a novel for being of extraordinarily low quality with an MC who is infinitely brain-dead (the entire story wouldn't even exist if he wasn't). And it's not like I didn't give the novel a proper shot, I read almost 100 chapters. Your statement is like saying to a gamer "let's see you make a game and see how it is" which isn't a smart idea considering that they are consumers and should have every reason to criticize a crappy product, and it isn't like being a game developer would change how they see the quality of the game like me hypothetically writing a novel wouldn't make me think this novel is any better. Not everyone wants to be a game dev, not everyone wants to be a writer or any occupation for that matter but it shouldn't affect how someone is able to criticize their work quality as in the case of a game dev a poor game is a waste of the consumer's time and money while in the case of this novel it is a waste of the reader's time and now their SS.
Neptune40:Fine than smart ass let’s see u write a story and see how it is
Longwei:I’m surprised yet happy to see you take the criticism to heart and maybe will try to learn from it. :)
"Fine than smart ass let’s see u write a ~An interesting and informative review~ and see how it is" Two quotes applicable here from a Smarter man then I, Larry Niven: "It is easier to destroy than to create." and "It is a sin to waste the reader's time." en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Niven's_laws
Neptune40:Fine than smart ass let’s see u write a story and see how it is
Another Reviewer said something I agree with completely about this subject: My limited time on this planet is valuable, and reading subpar Novels like this is wasting it. I write these reviews to warn future generations to not make the same mistakes I have. So shove your "Y Don't U's" up your A$$.
Tyler89558:I am purely reviewing the novel for what it's worth, I don't believe that I claimed to be able to write better, but that doesn't mean I can't bash on a novel for being of extraordinarily low quality with an MC who is infinitely brain-dead (the entire story wouldn't even exist if he wasn't). And it's not like I didn't give the novel a proper shot, I read almost 100 chapters. Your statement is like saying to a gamer "let's see you make a game and see how it is" which isn't a smart idea considering that they are consumers and should have every reason to criticize a crappy product, and it isn't like being a game developer would change how they see the quality of the game like me hypothetically writing a novel wouldn't make me think this novel is any better. Not everyone wants to be a game dev, not everyone wants to be a writer or any occupation for that matter but it shouldn't affect how someone is able to criticize their work quality as in the case of a game dev a poor game is a waste of the consumer's time and money while in the case of this novel it is a waste of the reader's time and now their SS.
Thats the reason for opinion as he deems it -people have better stuff to read then this- so his "isnt worth your time "can be used without problem. As for example this would be true for many people and im glad he posted this so i dont have to read it and think i could have read about someone that is worth my time(example). People use stupidity to create "faceslapping" and drama filled with pure sadness, when you use brain. Thus be wary of using this because theres absurd amount of thinga to write about and give it value. P.S. dont punctuation and misstyping (i wrote fast didnt want to spend too mucb time on this so i can go read somethin else)
HotIce:You should change, "isn't worth your time" to "isn't worth my time" in the last of your review as everyone have different opinions. Thanks for the read ^^ Even though you gave me 1 star, I should say thanks to you as you explained my shortcomings in your review and not like others who said nonsense then gave 1 star. Thanks again for the read ^^
Thats why mostly only read low star review . I did this for most of novels here and it sid wonders. Also the author description of novels is either on some whatever poem giving nothing at all except stuff that doesnt do damn in english oor just blabber when you see this you may know theres better stuff to find XD.
Potatoooooo:Damn i should've listen to what you said about this novel. This novel is wasting my precious time.
The most honest reviews are the 2 star reviews because they gave credit where credit is due. The full on 5 star and 1 star reviews are just people spouting nonsense without any substance. The reviews where they give an actual Synopsis are the real MVPs
Lemni:Thats why mostly only read low star review . I did this for most of novels here and it sid wonders. Also the author description of novels is either on some whatever poem giving nothing at all except stuff that doesnt do damn in english oor just blabber when you see this you may know theres better stuff to find XD.
HotIce:You should change, "isn't worth your time" to "isn't worth my time" in the last of your review as everyone have different opinions. Thanks for the read ^^ Even though you gave me 1 star, I should say thanks to you as you explained my shortcomings in your review and not like others who said nonsense then gave 1 star. Thanks again for the read ^^
but another 14k people said the otherwise. I have, at least, 14k readers for this novel and it based on inkstone data... Everyone have their own opinion, yes I agree about it, but let them decide it for themselves, and that was why i said to change "isn't worth your time" to "isn't worth my time". Everyone have their own opinion, but let them decide it if my novel worth their time or not, and his words "isn't worth your time is like he advised the others to not read my novel, I don't know though what intention he has... Thank you sire and have a nice day (^.^)
Lemni:Thats the reason for opinion as he deems it -people have better stuff to read then this- so his "isnt worth your time "can be used without problem. As for example this would be true for many people and im glad he posted this so i dont have to read it and think i could have read about someone that is worth my time(example). People use stupidity to create "faceslapping" and drama filled with pure sadness, when you use brain. Thus be wary of using this because theres absurd amount of thinga to write about and give it value. P.S. dont punctuation and misstyping (i wrote fast didnt want to spend too mucb time on this so i can go read somethin else)
Its meant for people who see things in some similar filters as he does. Whatever he meant may and may not be understood as an detterent or as opinion for people with similar outlook. For example i disgust when author makes char overly suddenly stupid even thou they should not be based on his setting of their character to overdramatize situation and forcefull ycreate drama to fill the story , instead he could write about backround what they see where they go and such. And of course i take you as no idiot, which is something that needs to be if conversarion and opinions are to be understood and "upgraded". Thus you may imagine what i mean. And also if you go with 14k viewers go look at heavens library path or whatever .. the faceslapping that people there love so much is filled with stupidity, for free he gains information and instead of heavily using it to fix all stuff he goes around "faceslapping" people who accualy have weight because they gained limited knowledge but thats one of the best knowledge they had acces to and yadyada . That could be and example. P.S. excuse editing and not bothering with punctuation and misspelling some letter im writing fast :'E.
HotIce:but another 14k people said the otherwise. I have, at least, 14k readers for this novel and it based on inkstone data... Everyone have their own opinion, yes I agree about it, but let them decide it for themselves, and that was why i said to change "isn't worth your time" to "isn't worth my time". Everyone have their own opinion, but let them decide it if my novel worth their time or not, and his words "isn't worth your time is like he advised the others to not read my novel, I don't know though what intention he has... Thank you sire and have a nice day (^.^)
Of course again if 14k people likes your novel this is good that means 14k people fpund your novel up to their interest but he saw something done which he found by his quality filters as poor thus there may be ways how to explain : he can be sad because you had good mind in something yet fuqed in thinga that could be done so nicely and hes dissapoimted because he believes you can do ,with using a brain a little much better, not get swung like sheep by now popular ways that children or whatever people find "cool" or in or ......or..... and such . Or XD he can have totally different reason why ypur novel he deems as waste of time because im with him on this your novel is not for me already from the synopsis and the things he caught as bad in his review. As those is already something im filtering because novels are filled and lamed with that as i saw too much of it , thus i wont bother to read about as therws far more better stuff for me to read because im not forgiving of forced stupidy , protag who is dum with random plot armor and girls that randomly get caught in oh hes great lets atick to him. Of course i beleive you know ,if you read yourself some novels, how bad that can be.XD well its done by roundabout but i got there piece of mine mind , in which you ideas mind find. Have a good day author.
HotIce:but another 14k people said the otherwise. I have, at least, 14k readers for this novel and it based on inkstone data... Everyone have their own opinion, yes I agree about it, but let them decide it for themselves, and that was why i said to change "isn't worth your time" to "isn't worth my time". Everyone have their own opinion, but let them decide it if my novel worth their time or not, and his words "isn't worth your time is like he advised the others to not read my novel, I don't know though what intention he has... Thank you sire and have a nice day (^.^)
I guess this is your opinion for my novel rather than his and you were deviated from the topic. What we are talking is about the words "isn't worth your time" and the reason why I said he should change that to "Isn't worth my time". Also, to be honest, I don't care about the reader's opinion about the harsh critic which could be called an "insult" rather than critics (I'm not talking about you or the one who made this review, it's the others. I will not respond to those kinds of readers (^.^)) Also, You are talking like "It's easy to make a smart mc, so why you author made a stupid mc??? Sigh... There's no author wants their mc looks stupid... Maybe you can try to make a novel if you have a time for it and you will know how hard to make a novel. And lastly, maybe it was because my incompetence that my novel is full of flaws in your eyes, but I'm satisfied with my current novel, considering this is my first novel. Hehe, thanks for wasting your time to a nameless author like me and have a nice day sir... Adios Amigos
Lemni:Of course again if 14k people likes your novel this is good that means 14k people fpund your novel up to their interest but he saw something done which he found by his quality filters as poor thus there may be ways how to explain : he can be sad because you had good mind in something yet fuqed in thinga that could be done so nicely and hes dissapoimted because he believes you can do ,with using a brain a little much better, not get swung like sheep by now popular ways that children or whatever people find "cool" or in or ......or..... and such . Or XD he can have totally different reason why ypur novel he deems as waste of time because im with him on this your novel is not for me already from the synopsis and the things he caught as bad in his review. As those is already something im filtering because novels are filled and lamed with that as i saw too much of it , thus i wont bother to read about as therws far more better stuff for me to read because im not forgiving of forced stupidy , protag who is dum with random plot armor and girls that randomly get caught in oh hes great lets atick to him. Of course i beleive you know ,if you read yourself some novels, how bad that can be.XD well its done by roundabout but i got there piece of mine mind , in which you ideas mind find. Have a good day author.
